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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-06-13 01:20 AM

I want to be the screws
turning with spiraled blades,
holding your skull together
with metal plates.

To be the lotion
spreading across your skin
which thirsts for me
the way I am meant to be thirsted for
seeping into your pores.

To be the strings
that cling so tight to your hips
swaying with your rhythm
as you move to lay in the sun.

I want to be the screws
turning with spiraled blades,
holding your skull together
with metal plates.

Asking nothing more
of your perfect body,
than to just exist
and allow me to do the same
inside of you.

_________________________________________

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

1 posted 2009-06-13 02:03 AM

A deeply sensuous and passionate write, just right for any night... or day. Loved this one, a picture poem of wonderful merit.
Heart2Heart

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

2 posted 2009-06-13 02:09 AM

Unique voice of emotion is here! Great.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2009-06-13 02:20 AM

"To be the lotion
spreading across your skin
which thirsts for me
the way I am meant to be thirsted for
seeping into your pores"

wicked good

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2009-06-13 09:22 AM

Heart to heart... Thank you.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Poddarku... Haha, thanks man!

My Dear, beautiful, SEA... Aww, fanksh! I like that stanza too.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2009-06-14 12:06 PM

You know, I think your poetry is really good. I don't just read because you play with my name (grins) - keep sharing. That's a demand!

A

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

6 posted 2009-06-14 12:50 PM

Allaboo... I love that you like my poetry. I wish I liked it as much as you do. You are wonderful. Keep reading... I demand it!

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2009-06-15 01:01 AM

You're writing is so very well done. Enjoyed this piece, Pauly-wog.

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

8 posted 2009-06-15 01:26 AM

scary

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

9 posted 2009-06-15 03:06 PM

My darling-baby-cakes Kaoru... Thank you ma'am. That means a lot. Do you really think that? I compare myself to others and feel so very juvenile.

martiniat... Scary? Hardly.

Thanks for reading. I am a scary guy.... booogiieeee boooooogiieeeee...

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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