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Eyes of the Wolf
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Eyes of the Wolf |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Only in the black of night Can eyes of the wolf be seen Predatory thoughts of what is, And what might have been Glowing red, savage pupils dilated Lidless and aflame with hate Singular of purpose, this lust To destroy any whom threaten fate Sensing danger as mortal fear awakes Grips hypnotic as in darkness born Eyes lit by the light of their malice Consumed in this firestorm Knowing, knowing, all my flaws to extol Growing, growing, those eyes swallow me whole |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 personally I like wolves |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~~~niiice use of rhythm..could almost feel the wolf's heartbeat in this~~~ ~enjoyed~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sounds like a nightmare, powerfully rendered fear. Wolf eyes are magnetical. Instead of a threat, we might also see the ever present divine spark. Maybe not so easy in the middle of the night ...  Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Little Red Riding Hood is quivering in her booties! INTENSE writing! Well done!  EA |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like wolves too. I don't always like what wolves do. Good one, CG. A |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chalmette Guy - I have a friend called 'Dakota'. He's a 6 month old, 75 lb German Shepard/Timber Wolf. His eyes will hypnotize one at times. BC |
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