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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the ying and yang of dogs and gods only the one depending on the other to be worshiped obediently and the other never thinking of it that way just being a dog or god doing dog or god things with my back to the sea I imagine how it was smaller water in bigger sand with mountains behind it's other shoulder and a place where it was mostly sky too that flat place at the end of the world that only the dogless gods can imagine ______________ daark (juxtapose series) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
pondering the powerful thoughts here, DS |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I love dogs. Just not the godless dogs. Heathens, every one of them. Dogless gods now, that's cool. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Nice symbiotic reflections in the pool of your thoughts. L, H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite..thanks lady!! ______________ thanks CG.. __________________ ms UBP, thank you for dipping in here lady |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is way too much for my over-sleepy (yawns and thinks apologies) mind to contemplate. I like how it reads - I just need coffee. Did I mention I over slept (again ~ 3-20) and I have to run because work beckons and ... well, I over slept. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san.. thanks for the read... sleepy huh? sounds almost cat-o-strawphic, or related to the laborsome and usless tasks of cat herding |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
*~*~ LOL ~twisted, Daarkk~~~twisted~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bel1e..thanks little one |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
and the other never thinking of it that way Oh, god, you never cease to amaze me. I find this extremely poignant and precious! Love, Margherita |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
I loved the "dog" "god" flip- flop of this piece great write D.S. Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'They' say it's a dog eat dog world. Or is it a god eat god world? Or a dog eat god world? Or perhaps its a god eat dog world?  Anyhoo, Tall, Dark, and Mysterious (I can't tell if you're Handsome or not by your photo ~ not that it matters, your writing surely IS), this poem fits in well with your Juxtaposed Series!  Yin & Yang hugs, EA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There are some days you just make me have the biggest smile. LOL - good one! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you special lady ______________ yoinn, thanks so much for the comments ______________ ea, thanks babe...I am handsome to the lady with white gloves that doesn't see anything except my leather heart.. _________________ ms myst..a grin back at you, thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You always make one think... and far beyond the coffee wakeup. Well done, Sir. |
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