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of glance dancing |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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mine was just a table for one intentional close to the window by the bar but still enough dignify to qualify as fine dining in the rain pool reflections you were with your three piece mystery again like a decoration that didn't quite fit and I remember your looking back at me anyway like I was the pimp and you were just escorting that wish it was the other way look was mutual as we exchanged do you dance to this glances and finally seemed eye to eye on our differences as we fit our things together secretly in public you whispered about being alone somewhere else like you usually were with him after dinner and what would I think of your lady ways if they were a bit more intentionally woman and my arms were your favorite place in town _____________ daark (forbidden) |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
This is absolutely gorgeous writing. If I could get drunk off poetry, yours would be the finest wine. favorite line: "and my arms were your favorite place in town" simply brilliant. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kind kindred..thank you very much for the comment.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger - I could picture myself within this writing as I read it. Well done... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"Glance dancing" as you present it, dear D., exercises an irresistible attraction ... Thank you for another gem. These gems are meant to form a very refined Poetry book series, don't make us wait for too long! Your words transmit that special feeling of being near to the ... favorite place in town!  Love, Margherita |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~sweet~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Dang, i've missed reading you!  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
"...rain pool reflections" Somehow, they always shimmer with slight distortions of image, so one has to look again to make sure she got it right, especially when there are mirrors and smoke. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Can never get enough of your poems DS! ~ Nice stuff... ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BC, thank you amigo ______________ ms mar, thank you sweet lady _______________ bel1e, thanks dark daughter!! _______________ KL, thank you so much for the read and reply lady! _______________ aw, thanx for the touch |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
that wish it was the other way look was mutual as we exchanged do you dance to this glances All this plus that wonderful ending... *S* A gal could hyperventilate sighing to your words. *G* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thank you lady friend..I do know CPR if you need it? |
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