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of simmer wind |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you had those day dreams on, loose fitting I loved how your eyes were soft sound glances and your skin was so nearly helpless when you asked my arms to be your only warmth and you said you loved how the chills felt when there was a man place for you to step into to compare the sensations you mentioned of wanting more then needing, and needing that my eyes were closed when I touched your lip seams and you kept changing them around to tease me like you wanted me to know them every way you did before I sipped some of the residue you left there and you spilled laughter down the front of my mind ______________ daark (do of sand) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
and you spilled laughter down the front of my mind  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
you had those day dreams on, loose fitting I loved how your eyes were soft sound glances ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yea that!! Gave me the warm fuzzies!!! Lovin' your sandscapes, DS~ |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
May I just say that your poetry tastes so sinfully sweet when I read it? A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes...thanks for the eyes lady ____________ ms bluezy, thanks babe, you bring smiles ______________ ms ali-san, thank you little one for the touch |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Luscious! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms myst..thank you lady friend!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
mmmm..tastes sweet...and full of spice! ~ARH  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
bother!.. Ali-girl stole my words!! ok, ok, I'll find my own.. delightful and very pleasant on the eyes... Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ARH...thanks ms ___________ ms R*B thanks so much lady |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Masterful. You weaved in a very tangible measure of tenderness and warmth. Love it. "Simmer wind" how cute! Love, Margherita |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
The way you put words together are incredibly wonderful! I especially liked this part - thank you for sharing!!! Pretty1 my eyes were closed when I touched your lip seams and you kept changing them around to tease me like you wanted me to know them every way you did before I sipped some of the residue you left there and you spilled laughter down the front of my mind |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you for the touch ___________ ms pretty1, thank you for looking out the window at this one |
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