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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-09-23 08:17 AM



you said you saved the rain for me this time
that you needed your coffee first anyway
and that you enjoyed seeing me all wet after

even though I was but a tree without forests
you said I had the limbs you always had wanted
and that we did fit so well together in our storms

I always loved your back to the bark of me
how you seemed to want it scratched without scars
and you just liked to feel safe without falling too

that you would have been a little girl again
if someone would make you a swing that fit
and put you under me to spend your day dreams

and sometimes nights, with star people watching


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daark (water woman)

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-09-23 09:37 AM


I like this water woman! I want to be a little girl too and I want a fitting swing, yes! Even though one of my unkindest childhood memories happened on a swing: my uncle said there was no time for laziness and sent me off the swing with a Ohrfeige, what's the name for that? (it's a slap on the face ... just found it).

Star people watching, now that's a fantastic conclusion, hopefully they are romantic - as we trust they are!

Wonderful, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2009-09-23 09:54 AM


Another great write from you...

loved the title and the swing...

with a perfect ending!

~ARH

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-09-23 12:22 PM


ms mar...thanks special lady.  The star people are just the stars overhead..I do assume they are most romanticly inclined.

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ms ARH, thank you for your gentle touch here ms

Indigo
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4 posted 2009-09-23 06:38 PM


leaf temple praying
her sky and earth remember
wind finger caress.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-09-24 11:46 AM


ms indi, you make leaves smile
thanks babe

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