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of water woman dreams |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you said you saved the rain for me this time that you needed your coffee first anyway and that you enjoyed seeing me all wet after even though I was but a tree without forests you said I had the limbs you always had wanted and that we did fit so well together in our storms I always loved your back to the bark of me how you seemed to want it scratched without scars and you just liked to feel safe without falling too that you would have been a little girl again if someone would make you a swing that fit and put you under me to spend your day dreams and sometimes nights, with star people watching ______________ daark (water woman) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I like this water woman! I want to be a little girl too and I want a fitting swing, yes! Even though one of my unkindest childhood memories happened on a swing: my uncle said there was no time for laziness and sent me off the swing with a Ohrfeige, what's the name for that? (it's a slap on the face ... just found it). Star people watching, now that's a fantastic conclusion, hopefully they are romantic - as we trust they are!  Wonderful, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Another great write from you... loved the title and the swing... with a perfect ending! ~ARH  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thanks special lady. The star people are just the stars overhead..I do assume they are most romanticly inclined. ___________ ms ARH, thank you for your gentle touch here ms |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
leaf temple praying her sky and earth remember wind finger caress. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi, you make leaves smile thanks babe |
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