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Open Poetry #45

Sable Reminders

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-07-06 12:22 PM

I am reminded always of you
In all of the dark and quiet times
And the thought pierces me through
My empty longing mind
Cleaving a path straight and true
To where thoughts of you shine

Helpless to thinking another way
Than these thoughts as such
Pardon the words that I say
The pressure is just too much
Forgive my remembering today
Of how it was when we touched

When, at times it becomes so real
It is almost all that I do,
Thinking of how it used to feel
Before time quickly flew
It is something I cannot conceal
I am reminded of you

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2009-07-06 12:24 PM

Chalmette Guy - beautiful writing, just saying so much with the passing of time...

BC

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-07-06 12:27 PM

Thank you Bill, you're too kind.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2009-07-06 08:58 PM

"Forgive my remembering today
Of how it was when we touched"

This is a poignant moment, when you 'feel' the remembered touch.
A tender write, Jerry.

Tara Simms Hall
Member

since 2001-11-07

Posts 87
South Carolina

4 posted 2009-07-06 10:54 PM

Oh, this is so poignant. Achingly so.

Tara

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-10-02 02:47 PM

Helpless to thinking another way

No matter how much we pretend we're okay, the memories slip in and we tumble back in time. This is achingly beautiful! *S*

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