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tommy738
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since 2009-10-28
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0 posted 2009-10-31 08:26 PM



I woke up today empty and lost
Where do I start
how do I function
When all I feel is lost

I know I need to move
but im not sure what direction to go
it feels so black
I cant find which way to go

I need someone to help
someone to guide from this place
is anyone else out there
can someone help me find my place

Im so lost

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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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Watertown, NY
1 posted 2009-10-31 08:28 PM


We're all lost, at one point or another, but don't follow me - I walk into walls! Great Write.

There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy

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2 posted 2009-11-01 03:21 PM


I've felt this way so many times... you capture the desolation well. *S*

And if this is about you in the now... this place is full of people willing to be friends. *S*

rachaelfuchsberger
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3 posted 2009-11-01 03:27 PM


Do not look at it as being lost, rather finding another route to take to one's destination, and simply put one foot in front of the other. One of my favorite sayings is the one about a journey beginning with the first step. Each turn that makes you feel lost, simply provides you with another opportunity for other experiences to lead you to your goal. You're never lost. You're just finding a new way to get there.

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

tommy738
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4 posted 2009-11-01 05:07 PM


Thank you all for your words of encouragment they are very needed right now in my life.
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