Open Poetry #45 |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana ![]() |
I, having been guilty before Of turning my back upon here and now Casting a blind eye against What a child once vowed I will treasure time above all else I will savor every feeling felt Begged forgivenesses offered up Small tokens this time too late For time is not the friend I imagined Nor is he willing to wait Will not dwell on what the wise cannot see I must contend with what is before me Drowned under the weight of it all Lord knows I have myself to blame Going down into depths unexplored Of moments unrestrained I shall gather all of these tears That fall with the swiftness of the years For that is all that is promised And only on that will I dwell Being that you cannot return And where you go, no one tells Everything else lies under shroud So I too, will live for right now |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
You're writing my life story too this evening dear Chalmette. I am quickly becoming a very great fan of your poesy ! Heart2Heart |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you K...I wish I could tell you how much that means to me. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This one goes deep into the heart, where you play the strings so well, Jerry. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~jerry... Begged forgivenesses offered up Small tokens this time too late For time is not the friend I imagined Nor is he willing to wait Will not dwell on what the wise cannot see I must contend with what is before me ~very good stuff here! ![]() ~s |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This holds great depth, dear Poet. Love, Margherita |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You should publish all your poems in a book collection~ seriously! I am still trying to find out who that mystery lady was in your poem...she is poetry....just read it again... ~ARH ![]() |
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Dreamer05 Junior Member
since 2009-06-23
Posts 30Kansas |
Nicely done! The more I read of your work, the more I admire your skills. Your work is quickly starting to become a favorite of mine. ![]() ~Dreamer05~ |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Wow...that is amazing Dreamer. I thank you. |
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