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A Mystery |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast 
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I Would Write a Poem I would write a poem and send it on to thee could I find the nouns and verbs that explain the mystery of red feathered arrows, flying to intended mark; of narcotic music mesmerizing the dark; of importuning doves each bearing a thornless rose, of giddy walks a'reeling from sultry desire exposed; of diaphanous dreams, hypnotic visions nigh, nightly perspiration, yearning's effort doth supply. But the muse avoids me words flee this empty mind, therefore all that is sent is this greeting, thus consigned. |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
This is really good. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
It is an honour to read such beautiful words which say so much from the wonderful (and published) poet that you are Old Poet. I am so happy to see that you have time to look in on us. Well, it soon being July 4th, you will know I would be very proud to see a certain poem here, which always will remain my favourite by you... Katriona :-) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip, dear OldPoet! Not all the words left your mind I see  , you choose them well for your first entry here, which I enjoyed very much.Love, Margherita  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
OldPoet - no mystery here, just good writing... BC |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to pip |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
welcome to PIp, enjoyed your words. yann |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
OldPoet, Welcome to the "Family of Blue" I would say your muse is residing comfortably in your back pocket, don't sit on him (or her, as the case may be) I enjoyed your first post, and look forward to reading more of your work. Take care, Tracey. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"narcotic music mesmerizing the dark" Oh, I'd like to hear some of that tonight! welcome to the blue |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
well...definitely welcome to PiP...interestingly, there appears to be a welcome quality to your work that seems familiar...your words were chosen elegantly & carefully...a lovely write... |
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OldPoet Member
since 2009-06-30
Posts 112The Left Coast |
My sincere and grateful thanks to all who have left comments here. I really appreciate the warm and friendly welcome that has been so graciously extended. When my dear friend Heart-to-Heart aka Katriona suggested that I post here, I, as always, trusted her judgment. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
It seems that you have found the words after all - most exquisitely expressed |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Welcome to Pip! Your poem is fantastic. Will look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OP, Welcome to Passions! I'm going to look forward to future posts as well as immerse myself in the ones already on the boards. Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love ~*~ KRJ |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Rhythm and rhyme seeming so effortlessly skilled, ejoyed, Bloodline |
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HeliaHeart Member
since 2008-11-16
Posts 53Georgia |
Oh it was beautiful! I loved your first post and look forward to more. Welcome! ~Lia |
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