Open Poetry #45 |
pip culture |
brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
overture… come on in welcome everyone stay for the show follow the fun brown~eyed girl opens act one admission at the door hear her heartsongs kewl heart lady watch her work spotlight on her she weaves her words our girl’s got grit unsinkable spirit read it in her words listen, hear it watch real closely pay attention now big finale coming kick the footlights out written applause standing ovation she takes her bows gathers bouquets hopefully anticipating tomorrow’s review to immortalize her words in pip culture blue encore… ________________________ ~this, too, was kind of inspired by margherita's comment with a line or two thrown in for ds... it's just me havin' fun [This message has been edited by brneyedgrly (06-30-2009 12:51 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, kick off the stilettos and have some kewl fun splashing your personal paints on this blank blue canvas. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This was a fun one Shellie. Full of whimsy that you seem to do so well. Take a bow. So to speak. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Shellie, it is such a pleasure to count you among our members, I tell you! Your talent, your effervescence, your humor, your loveliness, your sensuousness, your sensitivity, your openness add so much to the atmosphere of pip, that we can only say thank you so much for finding us. How did you find us btw? This is another cute offering to enjoy. Dance on and enjoy it, while delighting us. The inspiration is mutual, dear Shellie, always. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
On witht the show, this is it. Lite, fun, upbeat, Well done, Tracey. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Oh this is great, muchly enjoyed :-) Like a breath of fresh air here today. Heart2Heart |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms brown eyes...enjoyed your little dance here..wicked smile |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brneyedgrly - always most enjoyable readings from you... BC |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dear midnitesunshine... girl...i leave the stilettos on when body painting...they leave interesting strokes on the canvas...lol thanks |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
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~jerry... thanks for seeing the whimsy in this...it was totally meant in that manner. thank you |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
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~tracey... i thought of that line too when i used the word 'overture'...lol thanks |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
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~thanks, heart~lady : ) i'm glad you liked my lil' poem |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dark... i told you not to take your eyes off me thanks for the lines... ~s |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
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~thanks so much, dear bill... love, s |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
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~dearest 'rita... can i just say that you make me feel so good about myself...thank you for seeing and appreciating all those things in me...i didn't realize anyone was paying attention. i came to pip like we all did, i suppose...to be a writer...a need to share my poems with someone...to be understood. i chose carefully; i didn't want to just put them out anywhere. what i wasn't prepared for were all of you wonderful people...i didn't realize how i would get to know you all 'from the inside out' (read that in one of serenity blaze's writings)...and that i would come to care so much for everybody... and by far the best part has been reading everyone else's work...i am in awe at the talent in these blue pages and have never experienced so many kindred spirits in one place before thank you from the bottom of my heart, 'rita...you are awesome! ~s |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Brown-eyed Beauty, you came on the pip stage like a blast of fresh spring air! Your poetry is delightful ~ and you are delightful! "Pip culture" ~ Now that's kewl! Love it! ~ very clever! ~ and yes! We do seem to have our very own culture! ~ a family of kindred spirits! SS |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
((((((Shellie))))) ... yes, like Angelo Terrestre EA says, you are a "like a blast of fresh spring air"! Dance on! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...now this is a ticket well worth the price of admission...enjoyed the show... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Shellie, This is very nice, I like it loads. Love Bobby |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~beautiful ea... i think you are just as delightful : ) thank you, thank you for thinking of me as fresh spring air! i'm glad you got my title and i am thrilled that you are one of my kindred spirits... love ya ss |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
(((((margherita))))) heck...i'll never pass up hugs from you! love ya, s |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~hey, steave... i am glad you liked the show...thanks for playing along |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
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~yo, dear bobby... glad you liked my humorous side... love, shellie |
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