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do you ever have these days… |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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you know…those lean, lonely days when the rain wrinkles windows the type that stays and stays drowning, drumming drizzle and you need to go outside but you just think better of it feeling nothing more productive than the calming of the covers because what’s it matter really the world will not stop turning and you give into the feeling but you do not feel guilty... and you give into the feeling because what’s it matter really... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brneyedgrly - suberb, enjoyed this write muchly... BC |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Yes, I have had alot of days like that. You are a wonderful poet. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: What a creative way to see it, dear Shellie. Beautiful! To give in to a feeling such as this one, has its good sides no doubt. And, no it doesn't matter, especially in the long run ... Love, Margherita  |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
yes pull the up the covers, grab a good book, what eles matters. Liked it, Yoin |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
well I never feel guilty...since I always have been.as for the days, I just flip em off and ride through them...kewl write lady |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
What does matter indeed? Great write. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Brneyedgrly, As Mom used to say, walking in the rain will make you grow. Love Bobby |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I just give in to those kinds of days... but then, I love rainy days...all day rain is the best |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
quote: -------------------------------------------- when the rain wrinkles windows -------------------------------------------- What a creative way to see it, dear Shellie. Beautiful! ~thanks so much, dear 'rita, for pointing this line out...however, i can't take credit for it. one rainy day, when he was four years old, my little one said 'momma, look at the windows...they are all wrinkled with rain'... it struck me... so i wrote it in his baby book and have always remembered it when it rains. ~hugs to my little guy~ : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, bc...and thanks for the little poem you left me in my other post... you made my heart smile... : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~sweet rose... glad you understand those lonely rainy days... : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~hey, yo... yes, at that point nothing else matters glad you liked it : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dark... yes...you do prefer the dangers of the road over the calming of the covers, don't you, guilty one.... : ) ~love it when you call me kewl write lady, too... |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, jerry... for thinking it great indeed : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~yo, dear bobby... i'm glad your mom gave you sound advice... : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, sea... i only like the rain if there is someone in the covers with me... : ) |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That sounds like pretty good self-advice to me my dear, It is great if you can do it. Love to you and take care. Lindsay |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes. I too have had days like that. I just let myself go with the flow (of rain! lol) and listen to the rhythm of the falling rain. Hey, brown-eyed beauty, I doubt that I will ever be able to see rain streaming down a window pane without thinking of your apt deacription "wrinkles".   EA |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, sweet linds... for always lookin' out for me : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, ea... maybe next rainy day i will just go with the flow, too...  love,sol sista |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
" when the rain wrinkles windows." Love this. Ida |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Take my hand girlygirl and we'll go puddle splashin'...whaddya think? Your wee one's words reminded me of my daughter in the early am darkness waiting for the school bus in kindergarten. The sun had just started to peak out from the tree line. She says Mommy look! It's so fancy how the moon melted on the trees! Children are poets by nature. Loved this, Heather |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
hey, heathergirl... i would love to go puddle splashin' with ya sometime! i think we would be fast friends, you and i... love this: "Mommy look! It's so fancy how the moon melted on the trees!" i think you are right...children are poets by nature. have you ever thought of using her line in a poem, or am i the only one who plagiarizes her child? lol thanks, for your kind words, girly...  shellie |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~why, miss march... i was looking through here and noticed i failed to reply to your reply...and we can't be havin' that! i'm really glad that you liked my 'wrinkled' line and i am always glad when you stop by  s |
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