Open Poetry #45 |
Bones Tries To Protect His Mother |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones Dad is drunked-up again. Bones knows Dad will turn vicious soon. It’s only a matter of time. Bones thinks he better get out of there and take a little vacation for the night. Bones wants Mom to come along, but she won’t leave her man. Bones and Mom both stay, and Bones does what he can to protect his mother. It wasn’t enough, he was only small. Bobby |
||
© Copyright 2009 Robert E. Jordan - All Rights Reserved | |||
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bones reminds me of a kid I grew up with. He was small and wirey and lost the same battle trying to protect his mother and sisters. Never stopped him though. Alison |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, The Bones of the world keep working at it, and eventually get it right. Good on the kid. Love Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (06-28-2009 11:07 PM).] |
||
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I see this as a tribute to all the little boys (and girls) who stand up bravely to protect their mother against abusive behaviour of their father (or the mother, sometimes it's the reverse case!). This is so traumatic for children, yet it is so much diffused one wouldn't believe. Thank you, dear Bobby. Love, Margherita |
||
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I understand this impossible circumstance very well. All we can do when we are small is remember and promise ourselves that we will avoid that situation and then keep the promise. I hope Bones remembered. Ida |
||
brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~yo, dear bobby... this here poem is a little sad... "It wasn’t enough, he was only small" ~God bless him for tryin' love, s |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, What you say is true. It's common in families, and was part of growing up for Bones. Love Bobby |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, Yes, Bones remembered, and has alway acted like a perfect gentleman. Love bobby |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Shellie, Thanks for the kind words to Bones, and for reading and commenting. Love Bobby |
||
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, I'm happy you liked the poem. Bobby/Bones |
||
rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I'm moved by Bones's bravery. Certainly there is a place in whatever Bones may see as heaven especially for boys like him. Arana Darkwolf |
||
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Arana, It's my understanding that there is quite a crowd in that part of heaven. Thanks for the kind words on Bones. Bobby |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |