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Open Poetry #45

Perception

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-12-31 04:24 AM

Flames Aflame
Fire Fire
the Neurons Nephrons
Neutrons Mire

leap jump the space
of the minute minuet

patterns patterned
into perception

dream impulses
fashioned to the reflection
of one's perceived perspective
for the pre-scribed pre-script-ion

images images
the atheist sees...
aliens.

the believers believe...
envisioned of angel
visions

Pre-scribed Per-script-ion
de-script-ive de-script-ions
of the flashes firing
from the fickle fiery frame...
of mine.

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

1 posted 2009-12-31 10:57 AM

I love how you turned this into something "unusual"

Unique.

I like the style.
Whatever it is :-)

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