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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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I told a story that I told before Because I didn’t want to force new ones that aren’t quite ready to be heard It’s hard to untangle angry words that linger festering and eating creativity like acid So I told a story that I had told before to open a door to words that once flowed And I can feel them falling to my fingers again K er Plun k Onto a page that opens wounds to heal hurt that disappears more each day - Alison |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"Onto a page that opens wounds to heal hurt that disappears more each day" I hope there is indeed 'healing power' in poetry?! [so far though, it has eluded me] ... applause for this powerful, well written 'penning' ! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It’s hard to untangle angry words that linger festering and eating creativity Yes... it is. *S* But if each kerplunk can heal even a tiny bit of the hurt, recovery will someday be complete. Hoping for rapid kerplunking... and appreciating every letter of every word... *S* |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
My husband refused to enter into arguments because he said he did not want to say anything he could not take back.Instead his silence was sometimes harder to take. But all in all I think his way was best because words do leave bitter stings that are so hard to live with. He could always sleep nights as soon as his head hit the pillow while I sometimes had regrets to live with. latearrival |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweetie, kerplunk, kerplunk, kerplunk ~ write away the dismay. I know this is a difficult time for you, but whenever I find myself in situations that take a toll on me, I repeatedly say, "and this too shall pass" ~ and it usually does. Albeit, it ofttimes takes longer than we Earthlings would like!  Wrapping you in loving arms, Linda P.S. May 2010 be a healing year filled with promise of great things to come!  www.lindadowd.com |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
yes, the healing power of putting our thoughts on paper, but the really beautiful thing is...when you share these writings it may help heal others too! Thanks for wonderful poem. Zeitgeist. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Alison, this is a work of art outstanding! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
So I told a story that I had told before to open a door to words that once flowed And I can feel them falling to my fingers again K er Plun k Dear Alison think positive my dear and put all the nasty things in the throw away basket and don't under any circuumststances regurgitate them. You have far too many happy times to enjoy in the future, and you will if you bury the past. Good luck dear friend and take care, love. Lindsay |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
A very sensitive poem Alison, I feel the sadness and readers will do it too, Enjoyed your delicious poetry. best wishes yann |
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