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Open Poetry #45

Thy Fair Luna

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-12-23 03:02 PM

Luna, thy beauty is fair
Indeed fairer by far
Than for just what you are
Surely not how bright or rare
Nor your constant repair

More so than any mortal device
Is the reason I hold you dear
For your beauty indisputably clear
Those virtues can be counted thrice
No, something else must suffice

It is not outward appearance descried
Which strengthens thy beauty
To confess this, I feel is my duty
To me your fairness is found inside
Fair, for how you make me feel tonight

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

1 posted 2009-12-23 03:56 PM

I think this is something that every human needs to read, and believe. Beauty is not outward appearance. Good write.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2009-12-23 05:11 PM

Lovely and light as air.
Merry Christmas, I enjoy all these
little gifts to us.
K

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2009-12-29 09:30 PM

I envy your rhyme
and love your work...

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