Open Poetry #45 |
letter from santa claus |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I caught a reindeer I filled a basket, I kissed the clouds and makes the snow fall. I've fallen from heaven, I shook the sun and thrilled the firs above the torpor. It's the end of the dragon, is the sweet tradition gifts and greetings, treasures in the heart. Forget your worries, I'd be at your table dressed in red, you see I talk to you. Basically I'm happy you are my gifts you for whom I exist even in your books. Christmas with you that's all what I crave, so make an effort Take care of your reindeers, Take care of your forests snow and wolves, Santa Claus is each of you, make it last forever. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (12-24-2009 09:38 PM).] |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
yann, This is wonderful! I promise to take care of my reindeer - and Santa is welcome in red, purple or blue at my table any day. Thank you and Merry Christmas. Alison |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Enjoyed your post Yann and I wish you a very happy New Year. All the best my friend. Lindsay |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi yann, My little great granddaughter (she's five) told me all about how she didn't actually see Santa on Christmas Eve but she heard the reindeer on the roof and the sleigh bells. I like your take on Santa. Ida |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is sweet...and a timely reminder to hold onto our hope and never stop believing. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
this is especially fine! MUCH applause for this seasonal 'penning' !! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Yann, Nice work on this poem. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks alison for the colored and kind comment. best wishes yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks a lot Lindsay. happy new year to you. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
LOvely story Ida, you granddauhter is magic and she must be right about all. best wishes yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thANKS BLUE SERENADE FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT; THERE is so much truth in your words. best wishes yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks James. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Bruce, your comments are precious. best wishes yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Bobby for the read and kind comment. have a nice day yann |
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