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2islander2
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0 posted 2009-12-24 06:11 AM


I caught a reindeer
I filled a basket,
I kissed the clouds
and makes the snow fall.

I've fallen from heaven,
I shook the sun
and thrilled the firs
above the torpor.

It's the end of the dragon,
is the sweet tradition
gifts and greetings,
treasures in the heart.

Forget your worries,
I'd be at your table
dressed in red,
you see I talk to you.

Basically I'm happy
you are my gifts
you for whom I exist
even in your books.

Christmas with you
that's all what I crave,
so make an effort
Take care of your reindeers,

Take care of your forests
snow and wolves,
Santa Claus is each of you,
make it last forever.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (12-24-2009 09:38 PM).]

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Alison
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1 posted 2009-12-24 10:26 AM


yann,

This is wonderful!  I promise to take care of my reindeer - and Santa is welcome in red, purple or blue at my table any day.

Thank you and Merry Christmas.

Alison

LindsayP
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2 posted 2009-12-26 08:46 PM




Enjoyed your post Yann and I wish you a

very happy New Year. All the best my friend.

Lindsay

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2009-12-27 02:04 PM


Hi yann, My little great granddaughter (she's five) told me all about how she didn't actually see Santa on Christmas Eve but she heard the reindeer on the roof and
the sleigh bells. I like your take on Santa.
                              Ida

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2009-12-27 08:15 PM


This is sweet...and a timely reminder to hold onto our hope and never stop believing.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2009-12-29 06:55 PM


Enjoyed...James
secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2009-12-29 10:10 PM


this is especially fine!

MUCH applause for this seasonal 'penning' !!

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2009-12-29 10:44 PM


Yo Yann,

Nice work on this poem.

Bobby

2islander2
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8 posted 2009-12-30 09:31 AM


Thanks alison for the colored and kind comment.

best wishes

yann

2islander2
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9 posted 2009-12-30 09:32 AM


Thanks a lot Lindsay.

happy new year to you.

yann

2islander2
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10 posted 2009-12-30 09:33 AM


LOvely story Ida, you granddauhter is magic and she must be right about all.

best wishes

yann

2islander2
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11 posted 2009-12-30 09:34 AM


thANKS BLUE SERENADE FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT; THERE is so much truth in your words.

best wishes

yann

2islander2
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12 posted 2009-12-30 09:34 AM


Thanks James.

yann

2islander2
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13 posted 2009-12-30 09:35 AM


Thanks Bruce, your comments are precious.

best wishes

yann

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14 posted 2009-12-30 09:36 AM


Thanks Bobby for the read and kind comment.

have a nice day

yann


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