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Father
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since 2009-12-15
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Confusion

0 posted 2009-12-24 01:08 AM


As is most often the case with my writing I get an image in my mind or sometimes just a feeling and it will not leave me alone until I write about it.
It can be very disruptive at times.
That being said, many years ago I saw a picture of an elderly man in a cemetery holding a balloon... this poem came from that image.

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The Ties That Bind…

They told us it was leukemia
She was four
And with all the years gone by since then
I return here again to celebrate her birthday

I speak to her of things that have happened in the world since last time
But only of the good things

I lay upon the earth that separates us
And softly sing her favorite songs
Imagining her laughing as I do, her little hands clapping in time
Her tiny voice filled with the simple joy of innocence
Sometimes I fall asleep, sometimes I drift through daydreams

I often think about what I would say when we finally meet again
But to be honest, I know that for a long while
There will only be tears on the other side of “Hello”

I tell her I miss her, and I tell her I love her
I ask her to give mommy kiss for me
And I tell her that I will see her soon, God willing
And though it’s been almost 60 years since she died
Still he keeps me from her…
So still I wait.

Placing a flower on the grass
I kiss the stone that marks where she lay
And let go of a balloon, as a present to her
Attached is a note, its words the same as every year
“Happy Birthday Sarah, Daddy Loves You”


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2009-12-24 05:47 PM


A lovely poem, reminding me of those I have lost and miss~~still.

M

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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Florida
2 posted 2009-12-26 10:09 PM


Very nice, I can picture this older man. Love shines through. latearrival
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2009-12-27 03:41 AM


Beautiful poem, Father. Reminds me of my daughter and how much I miss her.
                                  Ida

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