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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-07-10 03:12 PM

‘May I kiss you?’ she asked
Knowing full well the answer
‘Only forever’ I replied
In blushing whisper
A plea voiced tender
That shall not be denied

‘May I touch you?’ she asked
As fingers traced my cheek
‘Only forever’ I replied
With trembling lips so meek
Downward to her eyes to seek
For they were opened wide

‘May I love you?’ she asked
And began to pledge her plight
‘Only forever’ I replied
And held her through dying light
As dusk deepened to starry night
As she softly cried

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2009-07-10 04:25 PM

awww...sweet stuff here....

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2009-07-10 05:33 PM

My eyes literally teared up with the tenderness of this precious, innocent ~ and deeply romantic ~ poem. If more men were as gentle, loving and as sensitive as you are, there would be many more happy women on this planet.

There was something extremely special about thid poem. I love your writing.

EA

Tara Simms Hall
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since 2001-11-07

Posts 87
South Carolina

3 posted 2009-07-12 08:08 PM

Ahh, this is wonderful...simply wonderful.

Tara

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2009-07-12 08:34 PM

awwwwwwwwww

UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

5 posted 2009-07-12 09:48 PM

This poem is so sweet and beautiful!!! I love it so much! Thank you very, very much for writing it! ~UNTAMEDelegance

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

6 posted 2009-07-13 04:02 AM

wow, magical, a man's dream come true

Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

7 posted 2009-12-16 07:58 PM

hello dear fellow. I love this poem.

it is well organized and worded.

I wrote a poem its called "no one loves you like I love you"...it has the same feeling.
Please read it if you get the chance. It is on my personal blog. poetryandwatertogo.blogspot.com.

wonderful poem..

shalisadefa
Member

since 2009-08-13

Posts 114

8 posted 2009-12-23 06:53 AM

May I tell you?
how truly talented you are...

and I could not agree with earth angel more
"There would be many more happy woman around"

Always looking forward to reading your poetry

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

9 posted 2009-12-23 09:18 AM

Thank you Shalisadefa....I am hoping you are happy then.

I wonder what your name means?

Anyway, thank you so much for reading.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2009-12-23 10:59 AM

I don't know how I missed this one... but I'm glad I'm not missing it anymore. This is incredibly beautiful!!

Merry Christmas, my friend... I hope all you wish for is yours. *S*

SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

11 posted 2009-12-23 12:27 PM

Another good one. I enjoy reading from you.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

12 posted 2009-12-23 12:33 PM

wonderful poem, lovely idea , splendid inspiration.

yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2009-12-23 06:07 PM

Nice...James

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

14 posted 2009-12-23 10:53 PM

Chalmette Guy - whew, the heart is fluttering with this one...

BC

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

15 posted 2009-12-26 10:15 PM

Lovely and I repeat all of the above. latearrival

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