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Peaceful Angel
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Peaceful Angel |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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So much time I Sat and watched you waste away All my life I have waited For this! chance now its drifted away So much time you Left me thinking mind lost Is it too much to be wanted Given everything then taken away As I sit listening To the clock tick tock the minutes away You were once here now your taken Life ended away now this day Never did you Ask for nothing always giving Now your sky fallen, darkeness A concrete plaque holds your name You always told Your mistrust this world Squashed your soul left vacant mind Nothing to hold life Now gone the ground holds Peaceful angel dirt surrounds Forgotten lost no longer you Me sitting watching clock ticking Time |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Good write, whiskey. I like your name.  Paul Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A deeply poignant write! Love, Margherita  |
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HopeAgain Junior Member
since 2009-12-06
Posts 11Toronto, Canada |
That was beutifully written. very deep ! great job  |
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