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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2009-12-15 07:17 PM



Like a dream
in a raging
storm, dark night
lit by lightning,
impervious to all
outside forces, love
in velvet black
resides inside me.
Burning like a
distant lustrous supernova,
waves keep me
alive, pulsing with
my heart, all
that i am
sleeps with me,
like a winter
snowdrop, awakened to
bestow the perfect
delicateness, to ease
the heart, caress
the soul, deepen
love to all,
time is precious.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2009-12-19 03:05 PM


It's always nice to read your soft words, Phil.

M

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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-12-19 06:50 PM


Phil, my, oh my, oh my. Sigh, oh sigh, oh sigh. I'm saving this! I really felt this. To be honest, it actually gave me tingles!




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The Southwest
3 posted 2009-12-19 10:07 PM



oh Phil
where DOES all your magic come from?


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4 posted 2010-01-02 08:05 PM


Phil,

You write as if you are opening a door to allow us to see the parts of you that all cannot see.  And what I see inside is beautiful.  Thank you for sharing.

Alison

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