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"The World on a String"
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"The World on a String" |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Can you hear Can you hear the whistle of the locomotion the horn, in a wailing commotion emotion commotion devotion promotion tracks tracks in the winter in the crisp'air taking us forward taking us back The more we search the more we read the more places we want to be longer longer gets the road travel down travel round going further going farther going faster going father to and through over and on the sea and back getting there eventually so many interesting things to see in all the planning in all the plotting using countries as silk quilt tapestry the destination is the less we know of than that which we do of the road a'ho another country another world another culture far different from here with nothing to fear with nothing to hide circling the globe to the other side let the journey unfurl in the ring sing circle the string of... the big blue pearl |
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ninjawild Junior Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 33u.s. army |
very.. odd.. but very creative.. here and there you went on to something.. but i think you took it to someplaces that didnt make sense.. ..wisdom comes from the better choices of stupidity.. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
very interesting work in rhythm and content somewhat reminiscent of Gertrude Stein |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I enjoy your use of words and cadence. I like this one. A |
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