Open Poetry #45 |
White Noise |
kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Words once entwined with white noise Reflect sheer truth into a distant future As if the moon has fallen from our night Timeless resonance of what nobody wishes everyone could hear I wave fear like a white flag To catch the wind (your eyes) Behind every other silence Consuming the space between our hearts We could greet our separate realities With a handshake and pleasantries In order to merge the shades of who you are With my black and white yesterdays. [This message has been edited by kindredspirit (12-15-2009 08:29 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"We could greet our separate realities With a handshake and pleasantries In order to merge the shades of who you are With my black and white yesterdays." I just love the above~~ M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A fantastic closing to a fine poem with profound thoughts inherent within! Love & Light, EA www.lindadowd.com |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
very nicely done! |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
Thankyou very much |
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