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20toes
Junior Member
since 2009-07-26
Posts 42
AZ, USA

0 posted 2009-12-14 12:50 PM


Daddy Find Me

Sitting in my window

I look at the bright sky

I can't help but watch

My life go by

Is he out there

Somewhere I will find

Or is he only

A creation in my mind

I hope to find not only him

But that feeling inside he has to give

So many people have it

So many people quit

So many never even try

For that I cry

But he is different I know inside

As least I pray

Until I see it

My heart will hide

I walk in the clouds, I sing in the dust

© Copyright 2009 Beth Wright - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2009-12-14 02:31 PM


enjoyed your poem, like an invitation to the look from the others .

regards

yann

Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
2 posted 2009-12-15 09:37 AM


Do you know how many 'rags' I'd have to buy?
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2009-12-18 06:29 PM


Enjoyed...James
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