Open Poetry #45 |
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Bone's Knees |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
What Bone’s eyes have seen, and Bone’s body has felt, you wouldn’t particularly want to see or feel. Bone’s lives with these memories and that’s a hard, and tough thing to do. Bone’s surrounds his self with people. That helps him cloud over the memories. If Bones didn’t surround himself with other people, the memories would bring him to his knees— a place where Bones has been far too often. Bobby |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
Sometimes you learn the most when you're down on the ground. Nice write ![]() |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear SlowlyFallAway, I'm afraid what you say is true. Love Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A wise thing for Bones to do. Ida |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - so true, it's good to be around people for some memories will bring one to their knees... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi bobby, this is a very moving poem, one at your best , it opens your heart with grace and dignity...Thanks for the share. best wishes yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, As you know, Bones always did have a good head on his shoulders. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, It's good to know that you know where Bones is coming from. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, I pleased that the poem worked that way for you. Bobby |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Bones is more than entitled to borrow a little peace. *S* And the others probably enjoy his company as much as he needs theirs.... This is great, Bobby! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A lot of warriors out there on the battle field could join Bones... Good write Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Suthern, For the kind thoughts on Bones. He enjoys your company too. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Magnus, I'm pleased that this poem worked well for you. I feel that you are correct about those other warriors. Bobby |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am glad that Bones has found peace in friendship and the support of others. I just want to wrap him in a hug. Merry Christmas, Bobby, to you and Bones. Love, Alison |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Bone’s surrounds his self with people. That helps him cloud over the memories. " I think many of us do that, Bobby M |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hi Bobby it's great that Bones has so many friends to help him out, after all thats what friends are for. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, Friends are just like family, and sometimes are the best family a person can have. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Nakdthoughts, I'm glad that you can relate with Bones. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Lindsay, Bones is lucky to have such close, and good friends. He tries to always be a good friend to them. Bobby |
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