Open Poetry #45 |
Our Sanctuary |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* * * Our Sanctuary * * * Our eyes lock and our souls merge. Upon the signal of perfect oneness the gates of our Sanctuary open wide and we step in. There are no walls and there is no roof. The trees welcome us into their hallowed circle, while the firmament bends over our heads and reaches down in all its magnificence. Soft layers of leaves adorned with autumn flowers beckon like first class seats in the cosmic theatre where the performance is about to start just for us. No sounds pierce the circle. Even the wind stops whispering in deep reverence to our sacred connection. Only our heartbeats communicate in perfect synchronization with the pulsing stars above. Wrapped in silent splendour we become vessels of love. Like a luminous flow of gold life’s most precious gift aliments our inner well. With every breath we increase the level of our awareness. We reach deep into each other to dig for the sparkling diamonds inheritance of our divine nature. Abundant and inexhaustible is the treasure of particles of love. So we scatter them all around us in every direction of the sky, to settle down and to shine within every lonesome soul who ardently longs to soar high. * * * |
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Soul snatcher Junior Member
since 2009-11-24
Posts 29 |
Sounds like the union of Twin Souls... Only one word Margherita....Exquisite Love every word... Ss |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful! *S* I could get lost in your words... and never want a way out. *S* |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, There's so much that I love about this poem - "...the firmament bends over our heads" and "layers of leaves adorned with autumn flowers beckon like first class seats" are two that stand out - as well as the flow of your words. Beautiful. Just beautiful way to start my day. Love, Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
dear Margherita, your poems are sometimes cosmic and heavenlike, this one raises towards communion of souls and has the beauty and conciousness of stars in night sky...Thanks for the beautiful poem. yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful Margherita...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautiful love story Margherita |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
I love the picture it creates a peaceful love encounter and the photo. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
We reach deep into each other to dig for the sparkling diamonds inheritance of our divine nature. Abundant and inexhaustible is the treasure of particles of love. So we scatter them all around us in every direction of the sky, to settle down and to shine within every lonesome soul who ardently longs to soar high. A real delight to read dear Margherita Romantic and beautiful. love and a big hug. Lindsay |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We reach deep into each other to dig for the sparkling diamonds inheritance of our divine nature. Abundant and inexhaustible is the treasure of particles of love. So we scatter them all around us in every direction of the sky, to settle down and to shine ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That you do, beautifully!! |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
My dearest Margherita Your letter soft and beautiful as a whole things that are floating gently on the water Accept me here my friend A special greeting to you from me love Nourzihane |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*blush* y'FOUND US!!! grins and glee me (seriously though, y'did) |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Absolutely beautiful !!!! Only our heartbeats communicate in perfect synchronization with the pulsing stars above. Wrapped in silent splendour we become vessels of love. Hope |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I love the cosmic imagery, and the merging of souls into something larger and greater thoughts. Very nice. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Poet friends, I enjoyed all of your loving comments very much! Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A private universe of joy. Loved this! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The Cosmic Love Princess, entralls her readers once again. This beauty rates very high on the sigh meter, my dear friend. I love your poetry ~ and you! Linda Angelo Terrestre |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
A delightful poem. I like the ending, sharing what you achieve, very nice. Zeitgeist |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear TD, dear Linda Angelo Terrestre and dear Zeitgeist. I very much enjoyed your loving comments! Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisite, Margherita! Painted with a delicate brush on a canvas to encompass the world. Owl |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Simply beautiful Margherita, Cosmic feel to it. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, Sanctuary can be found in many places. Some are quite shocking and surprising. I think your poem illustrates that. Love Bobby |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was just about the most romantic poem I have read in a very long time - loverly! |
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