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Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
Posts 96


0 posted 2009-12-12 01:51 PM



Things are walking beautiful inside;
Walking in the invisible day and night;
Can you see the silent cry in the sky;
From where it moves;
Do you hear the wind blowing love?

I know love-stay, quiet, slept and did.
I know love-afraid the truth then suddenly.
The law of love that speaks.

We love alone and never die alone;
A loving look - a love longing;
It's only God sent.

No mask internal disguises - the sea;
The cold from outside I hold;
to the night  -which is me.

Stand close to the sea, love;
Stand close and let it move;
Surging like the sea;
So deeply saying nothing kneading through.

Without the night;
With all the naked floating air;
The sea is my only you;
blue, blue to blue sea cold-
sometimes its fraility snows;
into secular wind winding.

Quietly, all the hush bleeds through;

Stroking, strolling with its body,
hugging, kissing, satisfied.

How can you sleep all day for nothing - love longing;
Not letting the words - not allowing, not down;
Let it creep in, far in from the ground;
I draw upon blossoms boughs;
To fill with words loudly my will for you.

Let the words move
as we once knew
Let comfort from me to you.

Of all the things walking beautiful inside.

See personal blog(poetryandwatertogo.blogspot.com)

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watchingsummer
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since 2009-12-13
Posts 8
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1 posted 2009-12-13 04:15 PM


that was awesome, it was very unique.
i loved it.

"If I know what love is, it is because of you." -Hermann Hesse

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-12-14 12:27 PM


"Do you hear the wind blowing love?"

~ I adore that line!!! I enjoyed your poem but that line will stay with me forever!


EA

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