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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2009-12-11 04:31 PM

Sometimes life blows up
and creates a smoke screen
over the path where you need to go,
there's no way to go between.

Have faith in the destination-
prepare for dodgin' and duckin',
uphill or down, believe in YOU
no matter what, keep on truckin'!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-12-11 07:31 PM

Impressive, dear Dixie. The road is full of challenges, no doubt.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-12-11 10:02 PM

Yo dear passing shadows,

Always keep on trucking. There's no future in stopping.

Love Bobby

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2009-12-11 10:33 PM

perserverance is your motto Dixie.
I have enjoyed traveling with you.
this poem says "lonely"

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

4 posted 2009-12-12 02:41 PM

Passing Shadows, I like how the pictures supported the poem. The first stanza speaks of the smoke screen in your path and in the pic. it is there up ahead. Then the next stanza speaks of keeping the faith, keep on trucking, then the second pic shows us whats around the bend, thru the trees. nice i like it.

Z.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2009-12-12 06:43 PM

I tend to agree, you have the right words
with the pictures...Looks like you are some
where around Tennnessee/Kentucky...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2009-12-12 07:42 PM

It is a pleasure to read your happy mind these days Dixie. There are always challenges, the unknown, the smoke screen ahead...that's how we know we have built some muscle on the journey.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

7 posted 2009-12-12 08:25 PM

Nice write Dixie, it brought back a lot of

memories to me from my truck driving days.
enjoyed this one. Take care.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2009-12-14 11:52 AM

Yeppers, Darlin' Dixie! Keep the faith and keep on truckin'! Loved this! It's full of spunk and spirit!

Linda

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