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martiniat8
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0 posted 2009-10-31 05:05 PM


Its not the whys, that matter now
its peek-a-boo palm trees, and "where for 'thous"
like little messages we send, happily ever after,
begins

but will

come true for those that see with me
pop-up picture-card, fant-a-sies
and those that like to read-a-long, hear the rhythm of-your-song

but will

sometimes you remind me of angel symphonies, or the color of evergreen trees out by the pool down by turtle creek side, a phoenix leaf floating flipping through my floatee net, the most beautiful thing you bet, is yet

but will

when she verbally express or asks me on a date, pray that it's now, before it's too late, time is wasting, don't wanna wait...

but will

Its not the whys, that matter now
its peek-a-boo palm trees, and "where for 'thous"
like little messages we send, happily ever after,
begins

and will?

(written in melody to the rhythm of Bob Schneider's 40 Dogs (like Romeo and Juliet))

© Copyright 2009 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
GBride
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since 2009-07-02
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1 posted 2009-11-01 07:52 PM


Simply Delightful!!!
luminosity
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since 2005-11-18
Posts 813

2 posted 2009-11-02 03:06 PM


oh yes! wonderful read
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