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A Sacrifice Is Made
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A Sacrifice Is Made |
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Kosmic888 Junior Member
since 2009-11-01
Posts 29Vancouver Canada |
When the flower lures the bee To its nectar supreme Scenting her lover In a warm summer's breeze A sacrifice is made When the sun and the moon In splendid embrace Birth the stars in heaven Then both disappear A sacrifice is made When the flutist whispers His sweet song of praise Dancing the dancer Birthing his space A sacrifice is made When man praises God The force that lives him The self's rendered full Of love's excesses This is the ultimate sacrifice ©2008 'Diary Of A Pen Warrior' |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I like the flow and imagery here. Excellent write. Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When we make a sacrifice from a Higher place, ofttimes there are unexpected gains to be made.  Hello, Kosmic One! I greatly enjoyed your poetic offering! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel  |
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