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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-12-09 12:46 PM

you held me as if I were the world's first tree
and you were the very last leaf
whispering to me with breath from wind
"don't let me go,
I don't know how to fall alone."

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-12-09 12:48 PM

This is beautiful, Paul.

A

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-12-09 12:49 PM

Thanks alaboo. You never ever ever fail to read a poem. It's like you're magic.

I really appreciate it. I'm down right now.

Paul

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-12-09 08:43 AM

Such a beautiful thought rendered with true poetic skill, dear Paul.

Love this. Cheer up!

Love,
Margopargo

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-12-09 09:18 AM

This is incredible Paul.

And when you read it over again, it gains deeper meaning each time upon reading. Powerful.

therightside
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 64
USA

5 posted 2009-12-09 10:29 AM

this is very sweet, simiple and beautiful.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2009-12-09 10:38 AM

same here

beautiful piece

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

7 posted 2009-12-09 11:55 AM

Wow guys, thanks a lot. This was just something that sort of... came out.

margorius... thanks mucho dear.

chalmette... thanks dude, that's quite a compliment coming from you.

therightside... thanks very much, thank you for reading.

passing shadows...

thanks loads.

Believe it or not there was rap playing on my computer when I wrote it. :O

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2009-12-10 12:55 PM

As delicate and deep as any poetry I have read...this is magical.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2009-12-10 01:20 PM

this is superb, I don't know what to add, I am breathless...Thanks for the very enjoyable read.

yann

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

10 posted 2009-12-10 01:42 PM

A nice warm feeling to this one.

Z.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

11 posted 2009-12-10 06:47 PM

ThisDiamond... Thank you. Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Islander, that's quite a compliment. Thanks so very much for taking the time to read.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

12 posted 2009-12-10 06:47 PM

Zeigest, Thanks.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

13 posted 2009-12-11 10:52 PM

ahhh Paul
few words
much feeling... excellent

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

14 posted 2009-12-12 01:24 AM

Thanks so very much, Lady. I do hope I've won you over, but I am truly happy you enjoyed this 'un.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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