Le Lumiere D'Etoile Dans Tes Yeux

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Open Poetry #45

Le Lumiere D'Etoile Dans Tes Yeux

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-12-08 04:07 PM

Why the Gods are against us
I’ll never know
But there is a power far greater
Than any kind of control
And it decides to let it show
As the starlight in your eyes

To usurp the authority of nature’s law
That is the key
To a struggling, fragile thing
Just yearning to be
In different phases, you and me
As the starlight in your eyes

Such a contrast between light and dark
The only dream
Of which passes for reality
In time or so it seems
It felt like such a distant dream
As the starlight in your eyes

Why is it that fate conspired to bring
To us tonight
A certain feeling of timelessness
Of magnified sight
And a gleam of unquenchable light
As the starlight in your eyes

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

1 posted 2009-12-09 12:48 PM

you burn rubber,

only with pen and paper.

Paul

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-12-09 08:29 AM

lol

Thank you Paul.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-12-09 08:37 AM

"La lumière d'étoile dans tes yeux" I love the title and you created poignant words to share your emotions with us.

Love,
Margherita

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-12-09 08:45 AM

Margherita, thank you for reading and enjoying this.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2009-12-09 10:32 AM

Beautimous!

A

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-12-09 10:37 AM

Glad to give you a smile Ali.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2009-12-09 02:21 PM

marvellous poem, marvellous title, La lumière d'étoile dans tes yeux, it sounds really very good in french.

regards

yann

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2009-12-15 11:59 AM

This is better than Mary Poppins. *G* She's only "practically" perfect. *S*

Very beautiful, J!

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