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If Only I Were With You
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If Only I Were With You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Bill I like your talent and the sweetness of your expression, always a pleasure to read you. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deep are the waters of the Bay and deep are your feelings, dear Bill. This is poignantly beautiful and I love how you embedded your verses in the picture. A great romantic write! Love, Margherita  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Beautiful picture and equally beautiful words. latearrival |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
truly beautiful, Bill M |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
I like your passion...can almost see out of your eyes during this moment, you have made the feeling so real. Thanks for sharing. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You are quite a romantic with your lovely poem Bill, a pleasure to read my friend. Lindsay |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Love and longing so beautifully expressed Hope |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Love the last paragraph. Beautiful writing. I would consider this one your best yet. I almost felt as if I were there with you. Ariana |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dear BC~ You are a true romantic poet, and the fact that the romance comes through so naturally, makes it all the more pleasing to read and feel. |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Beautiful...Nourzihane |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this has a bit of a Robert Frost feel to it the picture looks like scenes I've seen on the road...beautiful |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
yann - your words are most appreciated... Margherita - perhaps the waters of Deep Bay, and feelings are intertwined as one. I do feel that way whenever I visit there... latearrival - it is most beautiful there, and thank you for your kind words... Maureen - always gracious, it's appreciated... Nancy - it's heartening to know my words can affect one when reading them. Thank you for your reply... Lindsay - always your words are most appreciated and kind... Hope - to be at this place one can feel the longing and love of what can be seen there... Ariana - it is a most beautiful enchanting place, so many feelings are inside when sitting there in peace... Bluesy - to see this place brings out emotions, and romance to my writings. Thank you for your thoughts... nourzihane - gracious is your thought... passing shadows - I've seen much on the road also, but none to compare to Deep Bay, it's most beautiful there... BC |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so very beautiful... the longing, the loveliness of the surroundings... such a wonderful write! *S* |
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