Open Poetry #45 |
About Life |
Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
About Life You'll never break my spirit ~ Nor ever break my will You can keep on trying Until you get your fill. You know you'll never hurt me, At least, not for long. With all your many troubles, I can still be strong. I refuse to buckle under, I refuse to be weighed down, While you come on like thunder, I'll be acting like a clown. You know your many heartaches Can no longer touch me I will stop the fear inside With all I'm meant to be. To live as I will and know ~ I will rise above you, I will win in the end, And life, I'll still love you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You have the right attitude Nancy being positive, it's the only way to be. well written. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very well done, dear Nancy. A beautiful work, that shows your true power. The more we love life, the easier it becomes to cope with some unavoidable challenges ... Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very powerful write love the attitude |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
That was powerful! Great way to show your love lfe, even with the hard punches. Beautiful write. |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
See, I do have my "moments!" Thank you dear. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Nancy, this is a strong and beautiful poem, don't let anything stop you, love can win, your positive poem is warm and offers a lovely ending.thanks for the lovely write yann |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I loved this! Love the message. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a wonderful attitude... love this! *S* |
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