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Nancy Hardin
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0 posted 2009-12-07 06:06 PM


About Life

You'll never break my spirit ~
Nor ever break my will
You can keep on trying
Until you get your fill.

You know you'll never hurt me,
At least, not for long.
With all your many troubles,
I can still be strong.

I refuse to buckle under,
I refuse to be weighed down,
While you come on like thunder,
I'll be acting like a clown.

You know your many heartaches
Can no longer touch me
I will stop the fear inside
With all I'm meant to be.

To live as I will and know ~
I will rise above you,
I will win in the end,
And life, I'll still love you!


© Copyright 2009 Nancy Hardin - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2009-12-07 06:15 PM


Nice...James
LindsayP
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2 posted 2009-12-09 07:22 PM



You have the right attitude Nancy

being positive, it's the only way to be.

well written.

Lindsay

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3 posted 2009-12-10 05:10 AM


Very well done, dear Nancy. A beautiful work, that shows your true power. The more we love life, the easier it becomes to cope with some unavoidable challenges ...

Love,
Margherita

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4 posted 2009-12-10 10:08 AM


very powerful write

love the attitude

ken206573
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5 posted 2009-12-10 11:21 AM


That was powerful! Great way to show your love lfe, even with the hard punches. Beautiful write.


Nancy Hardin
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6 posted 2009-12-10 11:24 AM


See, I do have my "moments!" Thank you dear.
2islander2
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7 posted 2009-12-10 01:35 PM


Hi Nancy, this is a strong and beautiful poem, don't let anything stop you, love can win, your positive poem is warm and offers a lovely ending.thanks for the lovely write

yann

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8 posted 2009-12-11 10:27 AM


I loved this! Love the message.
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9 posted 2009-12-15 12:03 PM


What a wonderful attitude... love this! *S*
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