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Open Poetry #45

The Strength Of Water

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2009-12-06 05:11 PM

People are made of water.
Sometimes we don't know
just how strong we are,
we tend to lay low.

But if water can forge
through a wall of stone,
we can do it too,
as long as we're not alone.

Monteagle TN, interstate 65, mile marker 134

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-12-06 05:17 PM

And we are never alone .... wonderful thought and great picture, dear Dixie!

Love,
Margherita

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2009-12-06 05:20 PM

I enjoyed this Dixie, jo

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2009-12-06 08:55 PM

as a one-time geologist (and as a 'universalist') ... I couldn't possibly not like this 'write' !

v. well done!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2009-12-07 02:42 PM

hello Dixie, this is so well expressed and I admire the metaphor engraved in the poem.

regards

yann

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2009-12-07 03:56 PM

forge on dear Dixie
this poem speaks your heart
(great picture)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2009-12-07 06:20 PM

Nice...Lance Armstrong wrote a book saying its not the body, its the mind that gives us endurance...James

therightside
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 64
USA

7 posted 2009-12-11 12:40 PM

sweet and simple, comforting words. very nice

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