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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2009-11-12 02:46 PM



Ghostly grey faces stared
back at me.The company of
men, ashen faced with fear
and seasickness, the French coast loomed large.

Warships firing salvos from
14inch guns, weakening resolve.
Silence within the landing craft,
soon we would be near the beach.

Thirty men, tightly packed on
a flat boat, heads below the gunwhale.
Near miss explosions in the water,
sound of gunfire, louder and louder.

Charging the beach, smell of burning, and sniper fire,
machine gun and flak surrounded us.
Negotiating  the defences, fired on
by German 88's, wading in water.

Jagged holes torn into fellow
men, from the bullets of snipers, sat
in concrete bunkers, feet thick.
Blood and oil mixed in the waves.

Shells bursting closeby, showering
us with black water and dirt.
Mortar fire exploded all around,
heavy artillery from the cliffs.

Mines exploding at the touch of
foot or landing craft sides.
The congested beach rained on
by precise enemy fire.

Like angry bees, bullets flew
past, richocheted or found their marks.
Wounded crying in pain, dead
men littering the sharp sandy beach.

Scores of men wiped out in the
blink of an eye.Bravery in battle,
they died serving the world of
humans, in an inhumane exhistance.

A re-post when we are thinking of the dead at this time of year.

Dedicated to the men and women who died during World War Two.


Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

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1 posted 2009-11-14 09:26 PM


I probably owe my existence to bad weather that detoured and delayed my dad's ship. Thank you for this dedication to and remembrance of those who risked and gave so much.
Osprey
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2 posted 2009-11-14 09:38 PM


YES...indeed, very well written; a fitting tribute.
If young Americans had not given their lives on the beaches of Normandy and Guadcanal, and everywhere else, thousands of miles from their homes. I'd not be typing this now.
not forgetting, the Anzacs; The Canadians; The free Polish, and the Commmonwealth soldiers.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2009-11-17 09:12 PM


Thank you for this dedication...my Mom who has passed now, lost a brother in the Korean War...James
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2009-12-11 04:24 PM


Reads like a scene out of a movie, too bad it was real and alot of lives were the cost!

Excellent writing!

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