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Making Love To Morning
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Making Love To Morning |
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longbow New Member
since 2009-12-05
Posts 3 |
Well, Serenity, here goes, and if it's ignored I'll buy you some roses. We'll be ignored together as we wine and dine.(He says with a hopeful twinkle in his eye) Making Love To Morning The strings of Morning stirred her from her rest The melody mere' lingered with her scent As Grieg played on, the sun soft splendour lent To flame, with autumn hue, her pillowed tress The music stirred a wanting, unsuppressed That set afire lust's beacons, inward pent As phallic tempest rose, its power rent And broke, with love, her calm exquisiteness Wanton cravings cried as music welled Then shyly fading, slipped a pace behind As they to moist finality were swept Grieg then resumed, to stroke the passion quelled They lay as two, yet shared a single mind Full-sated, to those strains, entwined they slept |
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longbow New Member
since 2009-12-05
Posts 3 |
Flutes and oboes, then a wonderful crescendo of strings. Cellos calm the piece. Soft violins take a bite. French horns lay a softness; bassoons tickle the mind. Violins mix with flutes and clarinets. French horns,flutes and bassoons.....we're there. But that first crescendo of strings? That's the baby of them all. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Passion in love and music, is joy to the senses. Excellent first post, Welcome! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Now this is passionate poetry!!! Enjoyed your poem and the instrumental insight. Welcome, longbow~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love the musical rendering of this special morning. Passionate and exquisite. Welcome to Pip. Love, Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
longbow - isn't it great to make love to morning, knowing one is still there... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to PIP great first post go ahead and buy the roses anyhow  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Longbow, Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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