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WindWalker12 Member
since 2009-10-17
Posts 57 |
Hidden from View Walking upon a steep path, past tall, brooding evergreens, I come upon a sunlit meadow alight with blooming anemones. Here I stop to rest and ponder. Across a small green valley rises the rugged mountain I dared myself to climb; its bleak, silent peak hidden in a bank of ominous grey clouds. As I consider this climb in forbidding terrain, a gust of summer wind whispers: "There will always be things along the road of life which are not clear, or create fear but don't let your doubts undermine a winning hand. Though your eyes may not see the path unwinding or the obstacles strewn along the way, there is a part of you that always knows: trust this knowing, for it knows the ways hidden from the senses. Let inner wisdom guide you and you will surely arrive at your destination." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful write, deeply insightful. Thank you for this. Love, Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
well 'penned' indeed ! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Though your eyes may not see the path unwinding or the obstacles strewn along the way, there is a part of you that always knows: trust this knowing, for it knows the ways hidden from the senses. Let inner wisdom guide you and you will surely arrive at your destination. That was a real delight to read Wind Walker I think one of your best, Take care. Lindsay |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Really enjoyed reading this. Thank you. I had once found such a place,it did not reveal as much to me, but for some reason the beauty hidden in this out door room caused me to sit quietly upon a rock and let the tears flow. latearrival |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Much truth and wisdom in your words, WW. Ida |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Windwalker - Strange it is that we humans have a hidden inner voice that tells us right from wrong, good from bad. The irony is that we so often don't listen or that we just stop listening. Sometimes, a serene setting gives us a second chance to hear. Thanks WW. Namyh |
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