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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2009-11-30 04:05 PM

We, the us that is
we sink within
each others skin.
Joking reality away,
taking from what is for the day.

Together we stumble.
No matter how it may crumble
for another solution.
Tomorrow or the next
fixated on the rest

of what is felt
between two beats
and 400 count sheets.
Then, more often than not, alone
and still feeling no reason to atone.

Following for once
what isn’t dissected by mind.
What shouldn’t be analyzed or defined
by circumstance or time.

This, my sublime.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2009-11-30 04:28 PM

Thank you, lovely! I feel alone most of the time too.

Today is one of those days. Love you...more!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2009-12-01 01:33 PM

Karen~

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2009-12-01 10:03 PM

between two beats
and 400 count sheets.
Then, more often than not, alone
and still feeling no reason to atone.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Oh yea, you are so good!!

romantico
Junior Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 16
NYC

4 posted 2009-12-02 10:22 AM

Nicely done, good write!

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-12-02 11:47 AM

This is sublime.lol

Awesome, susan.

Soul snatcher
Junior Member

since 2009-11-24

Posts 29

6 posted 2009-12-02 12:28 PM

Dear Susan,

You just found our (me ans my sweetheart) emails and read each one out loud....... amazing.....our thoughts, our feelings as we plan to meet after 20 years.....

Just loved it.....thank you soooooo much

Richard
Ss

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-12-06 12:27 PM

quote:
Following for once
what isn’t dissected by mind.
What shouldn’t be analyzed or defined
by circumstance or time.

This, my sublime.

You live. And I so agree. This is precious, beautifully rendered intimate pondering.

Love,
Margherita

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2009-12-07 02:10 PM

thank you one and all.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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