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Open Poetry #45

when I want to write

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2009-11-24 11:53 AM

when it comes to writing,
I have many things to say,
but when paper lays in front,
my poetic sense has took
flight...gone away.
Leaving me, my paper is
bewildered.
When the paper is used for
other fun, my feelings
come dance in my head.
Yet when I grab a lonely
pencil to join in,
my hand has other plans.
I guess they won't agree,
as I plee, yet
I don't succeed.
Thought I may be in a jam(1 month, 5 weeks, 20 days minutes and hour's I will not go into)
My feelings will get through
just need to westle
with them all

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-11-24 05:34 PM

Don't plea, give grace for what will flow onto the page!

We all experience this every now and then. You have expressed it well.

Love,
Margherita

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

2 posted 2009-11-25 10:46 AM

thank you for your comment I truly appreciate it alot

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2009-12-10 11:29 AM

I can relate and have'nt written much recently
Hope

Nancy Hardin
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since 2009-12-02

Posts 58
Nevada, United States of America

4 posted 2009-12-10 11:36 AM

I've gone through times when I felt the urge to write, but it would not come. That blank page (writer's block) is a writer's worst nightmare. But oddly enough, when it breaks, it breaks big and surpasses your own expectations! Kudos to you.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2009-12-10 01:29 PM

hello Ken, this is a precise point of view about the way you and a lot of people write, you wrote it with genuine sincerity and talent, it was very enjoyable to read.

regards

yann

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

6 posted 2009-12-11 11:37 AM

HopeS- thanks for your comment, I've been there alot this week.

Nancy- thank you and your right. It does break through and surpasses your expectation.

2islander2-I'm glad that you liked it. Many people that I know of have told me that as well..glad that I'm not the only one.

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