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Value for Money
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Value for Money |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria 
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Value for Money The madam opened the door of a big city brothel, Pleasant service was something she always inspired, May I help you, she asked the gent standing before her? Yes, I believe Natalie works here, was what he inquired, She does, said the Madam, but she is very expensive, Perhaps you would prefer another lady instead, No, I must see Natalie, he emphatically responded, Well she costs a thousand dollars a visit, the good madam said. Without hesitation he drew out ten one hundred-dollar bills And gave them to Natalie as she led him upstairs, Exactly one hour later he thanked her sincerely, An exalted look on his face as if he’d just said his prayers. The very next night there was a similar occurrence And Natalie exclaimed, this had never happened before, The same man spending such money on consecutive visits And she felt quite flattered as she let him out her front door. Next night everyone was astounded to see him back once again, Giving Natalie a thousand dollars with a show of aplomb, An hour later as he was leaving, she thanked him sincerely, You have been my very best customer, where do you come from. Oh I come from South Carolina the gentleman replied Why so do I, responded Natalie, looking now quite askance, Yes, I know, said the lawyer, I’m your sister’s attorney, Your dad passed away and the three thousand’s your inheritance. Lindsay |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
It is very important that one is paid for services rendered, and it appears the he was justly rewarded for delivering the money owed. ANother brilliant write. Your friend always, Tracey |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
 Well, when there is the devil to pay, someone always gets had! Double indemnity!  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
 The wiles of men! Helen |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL @ your poem and the responses... Leave it to a lawyer to make sure he's paid well! LOL |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Well, I hope he was worth it, for Natalie's sake..lol. You're a star. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No input, no output! Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
To Tracey, Karen, Helen, Ruth and Osprey, thank ou so much for popping in with your kind response. It's always nice to know if you can give other people a chuckle. God bless you all and take care. Love to you all Lindsay |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
chilly it could be to my opinion,but very rich and so well written, thanks for the outstanding story yann |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Thanks Yann, your kind omments always appreciated, take care. Lindsay |
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