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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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 I have known the curves of your day sky better then the skin of my women I have worn your scars on my soul and your temptations on my mind and yet I am the god that worships you ___________ daark (swallows) art by DS |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I have worn your scars on my soul and your temptations on my mind A lot can be said in just a few words... This is a wonderful, powerful write!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern...thanks lady!! |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
I really like this "Ode to the Road" DS. It reminds me of Kerouac, as does much of your work, and, man! that's not a bad thing. Sutra 6: If your Path seems to be sprinkled with shards of glass, you should examine each shard to ensure it is not a diamond. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
AH humble thanks amigo. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You are a manipulator of words...a talent.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Your poetry speaks to me in places I didn't know could hear, masterfully done (again)~L |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms susiec...thank you for watching ms _______________ ms LG, thank you for riding along on some of these.. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
where the juniper is as twisted as the road that brings her his heart. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi.. her heart is a glass with nectar coveting the brim and then his lips stick |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
darkdaddy, this just made me smile. Its good to read you again m'friend.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs..thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
May she always offer her smoothness to your wheels ... ... road dancing, yes, that is the mutual delight! You are missed, so I continue to dive ... Love, Margherita forgot to add that the picture is wonderfully expressive too! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
*sigh* I sure do miss you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
She is a beauty!! The photo reminds me of someplace I've been before. I hope all is well with you. |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
I have known the curves of your day sky better then the skin of my women I have worn your scars on my soul and your temptations on my mind and yet I am the god that worships you ___________ The words are magnificient as always and the photo is awesome. Reminds of warm summer days spent relaxing with a burger and beer. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
...always such uninhibited habit to unfold the gleam of romance and wanderlust...a smile for designing windsong in this one and the edge of lace shadowed in the art. Very Daark! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..thanks babe..will return shortly ______________ ms martie, thanks little neighbor ________________ ms pretty1, we should do that sometime...and that too, thanks babe __________________ ms kl, thanks so much lady friend |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
Man and bike. I bet she's known your scars too? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks Oz...yes she has known a few and caused a few...and laughed with me as we both heal |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
on your road thank you for taking me on the ride |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sir, you have a way with words...makes the reader stop and think...and think again... well done |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick...you always are welcome to ride along...thanks babe ______________ magnus..thank you sir |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So your choices on Mon/Tues is to rest. Seems good to me.  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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