navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » Heaven
Open Poetry #45
Post A Reply Post New Topic Heaven Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Lamar Cole
Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274


0 posted 2009-11-17 01:44 PM



The piano plays beautiful notes.
The guitar strums pretty tunes.
The harp sounds out angelic music.
But the most beautiful is played on my heartstrings.

Your love plays a symphony in my heart.
Number one on the chart of love.
Your love sings a sweet tune.
Accompanied by the man in the moon.

Your love writes the most beautiful verse.
That lets me know I found heaven here on earth.

© Copyright 2009 Lamar Cole - All Rights Reserved
ken206573
Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487

1 posted 2009-11-17 02:10 PM


Your beloved seems to keep you above the clouds, and make you happy. The poem is very sweet.
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-11-18 08:23 AM


Thank you for sharing your personal Heaven so beautifully, dear Lamar!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #45 » Heaven

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary