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You want me to be strong
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx 
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You want me to be strong ------yet you stay so far away… Don’t you know, if I find my strong, you will lose baby, and not just for today? My Strength means there’s no going back, and there’s not one more chance. My Strength means there’s not one more time where I let you come back There’s not one more dance, there’s not one more smile there’s not one more glance, and There’s not one more mile. Baby, you will loose for good when I find my strength…. So I choose to be the weak, for the remotest of chances That you’ll wake up one day and miss what we had And realize that you’ve left me behind That you might just still want one of those last dances Or eventually you’ll return all of my “lost on you” glances I don’t want you to loose…. so I pretend I’m Ok… But I am not; I am lost and I’m tired of today I’m tired of crying in the shower, I’m tired of crying in the car And crying anywhere else hidden, away from where you are Yet, you want me to be strong -----yet you stay so far away… Don’t you know, when I find my strong, you will loose, and baby not just for today? My Strength means there’s no going back So I choose to be the weak, for the remotest of chances That you’ll wake up and see that you’ve left me behind and you’ve lost all your chances |
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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
This poem went right trough my soul! "So I choose to be the weak, for the remotest of chances, That you’ll wake up one day and miss what we had" tired of crying.. I can relate a cry from the heart, pure and honest |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well pondered psychological depth here. Well written too. You know of your power and you might as well use it. His awakening to the truth will be your gift. Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
" eventually you’ll return all of my “lost on you” glances"...love the line! M |
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Eirian Member
since 2009-04-13
Posts 70 |
Oh I definitely know how this feels! Great job  |
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