Open Poetry #45 |
The Inevitable |
Eirian Member
since 2009-04-13
Posts 70 |
Clinging desperately to hope To the joy that once filled my heart Watching, in disbelief as we are Increasingly torn apart Aching to go back, to those Awesome times we shared Longing to stop the inevitable Wondering, can this be repaired? Loving you has changed me In ways I’d never dreamed Yet still there is so much That simply cannot be redeemed I wish that I could see you again And be held in your embrace I long to nuzzle into you As you kiss my tear stained face My heart, it just won’t let you go And my soul cries the tears I hide As every day we draw it out Neither one of us willing to decide |
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Poetal Member
since 2009-11-09
Posts 74Texas, United States |
You should go back as love is forever tested and tried. Steadfastness is needed to make it last. My Honey and I just had our 40th anniversary though we dated 5 years before that! Thanks for the excellent read. Good job here. AL Inmon |
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Eirian Member
since 2009-04-13
Posts 70 |
Thank you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very poignant. It is not inevitable, as long as there is this deep consciousness of love that you display here in your lovely words. We change in time and the way we demonstrate our love changes too ... love is nurtured by love, the fruits may taste differently, but still they are sweet. Good luck. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eirian, it's been awhile! It appears that you have been experiencing some emotional highs and lows while you have been away from the pip family fold. May you be loved as deeply and as passionately as you love. You deserve nothing less. Love 'n a hug, Linda |
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Eirian Member
since 2009-04-13
Posts 70 |
Thank you, I have experienced a few highs and lows - the joys of a long distance relationship lol but I am glad to be back here again |
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