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viking_metal
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0 posted 2009-11-13 03:00 AM


I'd like to drown you in sensitive red
and take all those fancy things
that you learned from books
and pour the liquid down the drain

I'd like to liquify as well,
send myself down that drain,
strained into 17 holes
leaving only the good parts behind
for you to chew on

because that's what I'm good for,
chewing.

        


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Bad Habits.


Photography by paul, or whatever.

Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

© Copyright 2009 Paul Weisbrod - All Rights Reserved
Alison
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1 posted 2009-11-13 03:04 AM


Paul,

I think we hang out here around the same time of night.  I like this - I could go for a snack.  Okay, that sounded suggestive and I guess I should look all innocent.  But, danged - the picture makes me think I should hang a drool bucket around my neck or something.

A

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2 posted 2009-11-13 03:05 AM


PS  -  I really liked the poem too.  Did you count the drain holes in mid thought?

A

viking_metal
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3 posted 2009-11-13 03:06 AM


Yeah actually, I did. That's the how many mine has if my memory serves me right.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Alison
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4 posted 2009-11-13 03:09 AM


Guess you don't like girls with bibs, huh.  Okay, I am kidding.  But you are a pretty sculpted guy and you write right good and all.  

So what can I say?

A

Margherita
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5 posted 2009-11-13 08:52 AM


Hallo, disciple of Herr Schwarzenegger, Poet of bad habits. Don't waste anything, just let some bitter morsels evaporate and then savor the sum of who you are and of who she is, the center is always divine.

Love it when muscles are combined with a fervid mind.

Love,
Margopargo

viking_metal
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6 posted 2009-11-13 10:33 AM


Alaboohoo, I've never met a girl with a bib in real life.   They certainly don't seem to be wearing bibs around here, haha. The.. uh.. sculpt, is from training for strongman/powerlifting. I have a powerlifting meet tomorrow. Excited.

Margopargo, Ha! Also, that is sound advice... Thanks for reading. Ich werde uberleiben! Ich heibe hunga. Der schleiterbrauten est auber so gut. haha.  

passing shadows
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7 posted 2009-11-13 08:33 PM


wow

I need to get my husband a BowFlex, dang!

whew!
I can't look at this too long. Gotta remember I'm married. (reminiscing the single life not so long ago)

Margherita
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8 posted 2009-11-14 09:20 AM


In Deinem Alter ist es normal, Hunger zu haben! Wieviel Gewicht hast Du gehoben?


Earth Angel
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9 posted 2009-11-14 12:10 PM


Well, now! Aren't you the fine photographer! ~ and poet and muscleman and ...

I trust you did well at your powerlifting meat! I mean "meet"! lol

I got quite a chuckle out of Alison and her "drool bucket"! ~ Hey, Alison, do you have one to spare?!?

Gosh, Paul, I doubt that I will ever be able to use a "strainer" again without thinking of you and your "good parts" ~ of which there are many!!! lol


Linda

viking_metal
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10 posted 2009-11-15 03:47 AM


passingshadows... I certainly can say I've never touched a bowflex. You should tell your husband to come train strongman in Minnesota, though.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

viking_metal
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11 posted 2009-11-15 03:49 AM


Margopargo... Sorry, I don't know that much, lol.

Ich moch a weiss beer!


Earth Angel... You're all to kind, as always, and as always, I appreciate it. Thank you for reading.

Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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