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The Urge to Hibernate
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The Urge to Hibernate |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
How long will it last this time the silence the ignorance how cold will this heart become this time how long will it's beat lie dormant the cave looms dark and warm hibernate for another day and come around to no sound being found change me change me rearrange me signs say signs say wait so the bear oh the bear tries to hibernate ride the muse for all it's use in all the ups and downs the tower grows looms as petals fall from the rose |
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Poetal Member
since 2009-11-09
Posts 74Texas, United States |
Great job here, reminds me of me when I am at my Computor in my office hidden away in silence. My wife wondering whats the big deal in here? Thanks for the good read.  AL Inmon |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
wrote this one a while back, just had forgotten to post it here. Silence has broken and I'm up from my nap. don't neglect your wife, don't want her to be jealous of us here  but it's great to see a new budding writer |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I just told today to my mother to hivern like a bear, she is 76 and sleeps a lot in her house....Thanks for the poem, muses are not bears; enjoable read. yann |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
"muses are not bears" lol, so true, well unless they're like teddy bears, always there for ya, quite but inspirational and loving. |
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Callie Carroll New Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 4USA |
What a beautiful voice you have given for the cry to create..."change me/change me/rearrange me...Thanks, Cal |
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