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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2009-11-11 02:35 AM


The Lilsweet sounds
of Bourbon Jazz
a Diva so sleek
With Scarlet Pizazz
A Beast of the night
with Gblueeyes
A Cinderella stroll
So fresh and alive
Oh Catsmeow
Surees as we are
With a Bayougal way
We took to the stars
Popeye is careful
not to divide
Take a wrong turn
To the Darkside
GG and Sandy
Quietly view
The Dancing and Mischief
Club 635 brewed
Justjeaux to lead
wine bottle in hand
in search of a corkscrew
hoping not to get banned
Ilove Bourbon cowboy
where girls hold so tight
Riding the bull
all through the sweet night
passing the Ally
doing the stray cat strut
Peering in windows
amazed by the sluts
paying a Fe
for all that we know
sharing our secrets
along as we go
and Rich are the sounds
in my memories eye
we fell into arms
as we all said goodbye
or at least bid farewell
till next time



Richard Rendall

[This message has been edited by spiked (11-11-2009 04:08 AM).]

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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 360
New Orleans
1 posted 2009-11-11 04:32 AM


I'm guessing you where in the city during Halloween with the rest of us.

Beautifully captured.

bayou_gal_blue
New Member
since 2009-11-11
Posts 1
La.,USA
2 posted 2009-11-11 08:01 AM


awesome rich!!!!!!!!!
nice meeting u.....cant wait for the next meet...

Poetal
Member
since 2009-11-09
Posts 74
Texas, United States
3 posted 2009-11-11 05:47 PM


An interesting story with good poetic form.
Thanks again for the read.

AL Inmon

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