Open Poetry #45 |
Baby Enea's eyes |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* Baby Enea’s eyes * Asleep in my arms Enea is immersed in joy. To whom does he smile behind his closed eyes? What dreams does he dream? What is it that drives him into ecstasy? Where is this secret place where he goes back to play, to skip, to dance, to fly? Something transcends what can be perceived. He sleeps in my arms yet his mind roams upper spheres. Suddenly he opens his eyes and to my surprise he smiles. Eyes in eyes we explore each other’s mysteries. In my heart I give grace for this perfect little miracle that is enriching our lives. His eyes are portals to paradise they share amazing truths I know but I fear that somewhere along the way I have lost the key of interpretation. I need to search for it within my soul. Baby Enea’s eyes are wise. He knows about love of this I am aware and then it dawns upon me: love is the key, love is the key. * * (dedicated to my third grandson, Enea, who today is one month old) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Margherita!! What a glorious poem this is. You've conveyed God's love and the miracle that is life in the most beautiful way. A newborn baby surely brings out the best in us. Lovely poem, good poetess! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
babies are so nice, margherita this poem seems written by an angel watching a baby in a renaissance painting, I love very much the relationshipbetween the poet and the baby...thanks for the beautiful poem. yann |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This touches the heart and leaves a smile... beautiful!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - yes, love is the key... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How absolutely heart-warming and I know this too Margherita. I told my son only last night that every time I look at Tori or Tasha, I have heart flutters. They are a feeling beyond any kind of love I would ever be able to explain. Precious! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear Dolphina, I do believe that your beloved Enea is woven from the same cosmic cloth as his wise, creative, and loving grandmere. An exceptionally tender write. It truly touched my God bless you and your 3 blessed granbabies, Linda Angelo Terrestre |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you for sharing your baby Enea with us. What a poem to set aside for him to read later. The bond between you is strong. Love, Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, dear ones, for telling me you enjoyed my love words for Enea! Love, Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful tribute. Love, Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Margherita dear, you express the joy of grand-motherhood so well. Still I can wait another few years for my grandkids |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
From the mouths, or in this case eyes, of babes. Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Eric dear, now that was a pleasure to discover you have peeked in here! Thank you! Dear Dixie, you are far too young to think of these grannie joys, you might rather want a new baby of your own maybe? I think you would love it and your daughters too! Thank you, dear Rachael, for your kind reply. When a newborn locks eyes with you there are intense emotions, it's incredible. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are a wise woman, Margharita. You know what is important. I have a six month old great granddaughter who is a complete joy. Ida |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
oh how beautiful, my grandson's are the joy and love of my life |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
A pen express about perfect sense It's your pen Margherita thank you so much hug Nourzihane |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ida, dear Luminosity, dear James and dear Nourzihane, thank you from my heart for celebrating Enea's arrival with me, by commenting so lovingly. Love, Margherita |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very loving poem. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Lamar, for your kind comment! Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Eyes in eyes we explore each other’s mysteries." I am enjoying your words today~~ M |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
The gap between generations is lost when you gaze into the eyes of a beloved grandchild. Absolutely beautiful dear Margherita, says one grandmother to another Katriona |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
No, he doesn't know love, not yet, but he will. The love you see is your own, reflected in his innocence. Yes, love is the key; the answer to life's riddle. Beautiful poem by the way. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Maureen, for your kind reply! Katriona dear, is it you?!! Thank you so much, I miss you and your magnificent sonnets soooooooo much! Please consider to bless us more often!! Dear Osprey, thank you for your coming in and commenting so kindly. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Absolutely refreshing dearest poetess! ~ I've missed your wonderful words of wisdom and poetic beauty. to you ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Michael! Always a joy when I see you roaming the blue pages. Thank you for stopping by! Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Margherita how did I miss this beautiful tale about your much loved grand-child. He must already feel so lucky to have such a wonderful Grandma. Thanks for sharing. Love and a big hug dear friend. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Margherita how did I miss this beautiful tale about your much loved grand-child. He must already feel so lucky to have such a wonderful Grandma. Thanks for sharing. Love and a big hug dear friend. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Margherita how did I miss this beautiful tale about your much loved grand-child. He must already feel so lucky to have such a wonderful Grandma. Thanks for sharing. Love and a big hug dear friend. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Margherita how did I miss this beautiful tale about your much loved grand-child. He must already feel so lucky to have such a wonderful Grandma. Thanks for sharing. Love and a big hug dear friend. Lindsay |
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Poetal Member
since 2009-11-09
Posts 74Texas, United States |
Top of the poetry chain is words about children and the connection between mother and child. You share heartfelt feelings in this one. Thanks for the good read. AL AL Inmon |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Lindsay, for your sweet comment! Probably you don't even know that it appears four times, this happens when the computer seems so slow, that we think we have to hit again and again ... the multiple messages resound like lovely echoes Thank you, dear Al. Children are indeed an immense source of inspiration! Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Suddenly he opens his eyes and to my surprise he smiles. Eyes in eyes we explore each other’s mysteries. My dear Margherita how could he not smile when he looks at his loving, doting Granny, I'm even smiling myself. A beautiful post from a lovely lady. love. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Suddenly he opens his eyes and to my surprise he smiles. Eyes in eyes we explore each other’s mysteries. My dear Margherita how could he not smile when he looks at his loving, doting Granny, I'm even smiling myself. A beautiful post from a lovely lady. love. Lindsay |
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