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At Death's Door
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At Death's Door |
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Kosmic888 Junior Member
since 2009-11-01
Posts 29Vancouver Canada |
At death’s door The machine of mind’s last attempt At designing a new form of the search A kaleidoscope of patterns, patterning Synapsed onto the shadow world Fractals of light tunneled Through skeletal remains Of illusory impulses Brain flickers gone Reloaded on the other side With persistent gross urges Still requiring expression in realms of never The all-pervading Giver Forgotten in the process Left hanging on burnt-out matchsticks Snuffed out by the winds of false desire Before death, mind After death, illusory impulses Smoke and mirrors from the Vegas trickster Who likes to pull shrouds from her plastic thumb The uninvited guest at the wedding A vicious cycle of re-incarnated shapes Bouncing off mirrored crystals Of multi-dimensional existence Reflecting, as it were The enchanting mirrored-lake of Narcissus Aye, death is the ultimate revilement To the ego, that constant activity Of damning the free-flowing waters Of love’s eternal silence Close-fisted, gasping for one last breath It doesn’t have to end this way ©2008 ‘Diary Of A Pen Warrior’ |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
quote:Loved these lines among other gems in this piece. No it definitely doesn't have to end this way, and perhaps it never ends? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Interesting take on the theme, dear Kosmic888! You display excellent writing skills. We have our beliefs and we all try to know what will happen "at Death's door". No more dualism, love will surround and fill us. Soul is the keyword probably ... No, it need not end that way! Love, Margherita |
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Kosmic888 Junior Member
since 2009-11-01
Posts 29Vancouver Canada |
Mysteria, Margherita,again thanks for reviewing my work, I appreciate it. I also love the comments you made, it shows me how individually wonderful we all are. The one and only thing we have in common is that we are shaped and made of Light Supreme. You in fact are my sisters/brothers, whatever the case may be, therefore, I stand in Love with you - Peace Ron 'we are all connected by strings of light' |
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